
Cover Art By: fanarts_series
Title: The Awakening
Author: Keira Marcos
Fandom: The Sentinel
Pairing: Blair/Jim
Betas: Ladyholder & Kelly
Status: Complete
Word Count: 69,152
Rating: NC-17 (for sex, violence, and very adult themes)
Warnings: Foul language, explicit sex, violence, murder, blood, discussion of sexual abuse and violence against minor characters, and various other things you might suspect in a story about a Sentinel Cop and his Guide. Mean!Carolyn. Selfish!Naomi.
Summary: Detective Jim Ellison doesn’t want a Guide. What he wants is peace and quiet and maybe for his ex-wife to disappear. Dr. Blair Sandburg, a successful profiler with the FBI, has nearly given up on finding his Sentinel. Then the night came where one’s pain drew the other across the country – neither will ever be the same.
Disclaimer: I don’t own them. I don’t pretend to. I won’t make money off of them. I rarely spend my time doing things that actually make money—much to my husband’s utter dismay.
Check out the eBook Section for Downloads for this novel.
| Part One | Part Six |
| Part Two | Part Seven |
| Part Three | Part Eight |
| Part Four | Part Nine |
| Part Five | Part Ten |
Characters
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![]() Megan Connor (Actress: Anna Galvin) |
![]() Sentinel Markus Jergins (Actor: Shamar Moore) |
![]() Guide Thomas Howard (Actor: Brian Austin Green) |
![]() Sentinel Daniel Jamieson (Actor: Josh Duhamel) |
![]() Guide Chad Moore (Actor: Brian Buckley) |
![]() Alpha Sentinel Heath Edwards (Actor: Michael T. Weiss) |
![]() Alpha Guide Marie Edwards (Actress: Andrea Parker) |
![]() Sentinel Jacob Summers (Actor: Channing Tatum) |
![]() Guide Elizabeth Arnold (Actress: Natalie Portman) |















67 comments
missfae
April 1, 2009 at 4:29 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
On my way out the door, but this sounds like an outstanding read. I will start it as soon as I return… hugs. to you.
Shaz
April 1, 2009 at 9:51 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I enjoyed this as much as I did Sentinels of Atlantis it has some similar points as the SofA but it seems to be an entire separate universe as while it might concevabley work time wise as SGA starts 2004 while Sentinel was in the second half of the nineties so discovering a empathic sentinel would work timewise but I would say a different uni as the bonding is differnet but more importantly in this uni a Sentinel who is online seems to be more sensitve as they do not usually survive more than a year unbonded and as for the Guides the sexual thing is differnt as well.
I would actually love to see a Sentinel Atlantis version of this Universe as well imagine ROdney coping with what a Guide in this universe has to or the Story of how John came on line in this universe did it happen in Afganistan or in the sloitude of the Antartic or posibly it happened in Afganistan and Antartica with the limited senorary input of the endless ice let him keep control or something After all Rodney wouldn’t be in the American database as he is Candian or possibly Rodney was Latent and came online in Russia when John did in reaction.
Looking forward to all your stories
including the new Sentinel of Atlantis you mentionioned you are working on
Shaz
Gadfly
April 1, 2009 at 9:59 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Loved it!! Great characterisations and an excellent story that is just begging for many, many sequels to be written (am willing to beg!)
inalaska2
April 1, 2009 at 4:23 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
i am confused. i belong to your yahoo group. i got the email that you had updated (!!!), and followed the email link here. this page says i can download in pdf format, but when i click on that, it takes me back to the yahoo group. and when i click on the link for this story in the last message, it brings me back to here. what am i missing?
Keira Marcos
April 1, 2009 at 4:51 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
You can either read the story in HTML starting with part 1 underneath the link to my yahoo group OR you can go the file section in my Yahoo group and download the PDF to your computer.
inalaska2
April 1, 2009 at 5:09 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
uhhhh, i guess i am still missing something because i can’t find the file section in the group. am i in the right group?
keirasworld · Keira’s World
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/keirasworld/message/18
where is the file part? its not listed on the left side as it is in other yahoo groups i belong to.
Keira Marcos
April 1, 2009 at 5:55 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
It’s in the side menu right under the “message” area.
Click here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/keirasworld/files/
inalaska2
April 1, 2009 at 6:09 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
sorry to be a bother but i still cant get to it.
it won’t let me access that area as i am “not a moderator.”
Keira Marcos
April 1, 2009 at 6:26 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I’ve reset the section. Please try again and let me know. Sometimes Yahoo sucks a big one.
inalaska2
April 1, 2009 at 6:43 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
YES!
Marchann
April 2, 2009 at 10:18 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Wow, this was a great read. I would love to see another case in this AU. I am off to read some more of your fanfiction. Thanks for your hard work om making this such a well worked story.
Shaz
April 4, 2009 at 3:09 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
You know with the NID out there and Carson’s groundbreaking Gene therapy techniques that were all done before they left for Altantis only not used due to the FDA so had to wait until Altlanis and out of their control to test on a human
How long do you think it would take the NID to steal the techniques and start expeimenting with the Sentinel and Guide genes possibly combining them and then it they hit a ATA without knowing with one of the unknowing test subjects
That would be an interesting plot
Shaz
Margaret
April 6, 2009 at 2:17 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
PS In re hashbrown casserole; are you Southern or just really like Cracker Barrel?
:>9 I just had to ask! *g*
Keira Marcos
April 6, 2009 at 2:52 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I’m so southern it hurts to hear me talk, sweetie.
Margaret
April 27, 2009 at 1:05 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
No problems, here hon! I’m from the grand ole state of Mississippi! We’ll be Southern together!
Levi
April 6, 2009 at 8:32 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I was just wondering if you could recommend any sentinel stories. You have me addicted. I actually loved this story more than any of your Stargate Atlantis stories and I love your Stargate Atlantis stories.
yinka wills
April 10, 2009 at 8:57 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Woah.
I’ve just spent the last 3 or so hours, on Good Friday (an Easter public holiday in England) reading this.
As a long time Sentinel fanfic reader – now moved on to Stargate Atlantis and Criminal Minds- I thought I’d pretty much read all there was to read in this fandom.
Fabulous story and a great spin on the characters of Jim and Blair. Love fics where Blair is strong in his own right, and I like that you don’t feminize any of the male characters in slash pairings you write.
Great, great story, plot, pacing. Just wish the little girl could have been rescued in time.The death scene and aftermath were… incredibly powerful.
Awesome. More Jim and Blair fics, please!
Now, if only I could persuade you to get into writing Criminal Minds, with Hotch/Reid as the pairing, my joy would be complete.
Happy Easter,(if you celebrate it)
Yinka
Keira Marcos
April 10, 2009 at 12:05 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I have to say that if I wrote Criminal minds it would be Morgan/Reid — I just don’t think Hotch is sexy. I mean I like his character but I wouldn’t pair him with Reid.
Shadow
April 19, 2009 at 5:33 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Oh, do you think you might ever write that? I would love to read it!
Also, I’ve seen mention that you’ve ben writing for a number of years. Do you happen to have any older fiction in other fandoms that we can find elsewhere or even some published works we can hunt down? I love you’re writing style. And I absolutely love this Sentinel fic. I just reread it for the third time…. Have you ever had an interest in Due South?
Keira Marcos
April 20, 2009 at 6:37 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
No– all the finished fan fic I’ve written is up on the website. Fan Fic became a hobby for me a couple of years ago but I never posted anything until the last year.
I’ve never watched Due South but I’m very tempted to write Reid/Morgan for Criminal Minds. It might end up as part of my new SGA/Criminal Minds/Sentinel Fusion. I think Morgan would make a great Sentinel — as you can see I’ve cast the actor that plays him in my Awakenings story.
Shadow
April 24, 2009 at 4:56 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
*Is ecstatic with the possibility of such a crossover*
I think that would be wonderful. Morgan certainly fits the bill and I would love to see him paired with Reid. Their personalities are complimentary. Plus Reid reminds me a bit of Blair.
If you’d like to watch Due South I can see about posting some of the series on Megavideo.com. If I can figure out how. ^_^ I’d offer to send you the DVDs, but sometimes I’ve found that people consider the offer offensive, so I thought megavid was a good compromise.
It’s a wonderful series and a wonderful fandom. I thought you might like it because its style reminds me of your writing. Plus one of the main characters, Benton Fraser is very Sentinel like even though in this universe they don’t technically exist. He has a deaf half-wolf named Diefenbaker that reads lips in English and French and his byline is: “I came to Chicago on the trail of the killers of my Father and for reasons that don’t need exploring at this juncture, I remained attached as liason with the Chicago Police dept.” I think I messed it up some, but that’s the gist. My favorite seasons are those involving the second Ray(Season 3&4 in Canada and Season 3 in the US version). He has a more engaging dynamic with Fraser. It’s a universe where anything is plausible for th simple fact that Fraser’s involved with it, point in case, Ray K(Second Ray) and Fraser used fire extinguishers as jet packs in order to escape a sinking ship. Because it was them, it worked. There was also buddy breathing involved (a kiss/exchange of air). Paul Gross, the actor for Benton Fraser (And producer for some seasons) encouraged the fanfic, even slash writing and found people’s interest in such intriguing. Oh, dear. I seem to have run on for a bit. Sorry. Hope you don’t mind.
Alexkenobi
May 12, 2009 at 7:08 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Yes Please Keira
I absolutely love your stories and i can so see the pairing of Morgan and Reid working. I cant wait to see what you come up with next .. i practically camp on your site waiting for updates.
Stephanie
August 16, 2011 at 1:18 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Cool! That sounds very interesting. It’s always nice to see new fic from you since your stories are so well developed and thought out. Are you going to include any other Criminal Minds characters beside Morgan and Reid? I’m very fond of Hotch and Rossi (as a pairing or friends) but Garcia’s my utmost favorite character as far as personality goes ^.^
Is Morgan your favorite character onscreen or do you just like his actor’s appearance? You’ve used him in a few stories so I was curious.
Keira Marcos
August 18, 2011 at 6:50 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I worship Shemar Moore. WORSHIP.
djaddict
April 17, 2009 at 8:20 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
OMG! You added pictures!!!
Much love!
theshadowpanther
April 22, 2009 at 9:23 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
HOMG Pictures. Damn Blair looks HOT. Ow. -fans self- Absolutely love Heath as well. *Hee* One final squee for Daniel Jamieson/Josh Duhamel and then the absolutely *cute* pairing of Jacob Summers and Elizabeth Arnold and I’ll shut up now. *squees quietly*
Tempest
April 25, 2009 at 4:20 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I had finished reading a fic at 1 o’clock in the morning and was planning to go to sleep when I decided to read The Awakening a little while. Needless to say, it is now 4:15 in the morning. I could not stop reading this fic.
This is actually the first Sentinel only fic that I’ve read, although I have read numerous crossover fics with the Sentinel. I gotta admit, it was totally worth it.
Do you have any recommendations for Sentinel Jim/Blair fics? Or even a link to your favorite Sentinel fanfic group? If so, would you mind sending a few of those links my way? I’m very interested in reading more Sentinel fics.
Oh, by the way, I really loved all your fics, — at least I hope I’ve read every fic you’ve written–, I’ve read Sentinels of Atlantis twice, and the What Might Have Been series twice as well. I look forward to further updates.
Stef
May 12, 2009 at 9:16 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Ooh, pictures! Thank you!
I’m about to start reading this for what I think is the third or fourth time. I just finished reading your SGA “What Might Have Been” series for the sixth time. Yeah, I love your stories that much. I’ve been exhausted from going back to school and having to get up at 4:30 every day to commute there, and even though I haven’t felt like reading much fanfiction, your stories just make me feel so wonderful in the afternoons once I get home. It’s like I said in a comment to another post: your stories are like the written version of comfort food for me. They have a great combination of angst, drama, and humor, so they feel more plausible and realistic, which helps me connect to the characters and the stories even more.
Thank you for everything that you do, and please don’t ever stop writing. I’m very much looking forward to more of all of your series.
Michelle
May 24, 2009 at 6:14 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
ya know, ive never actually seen an ep of The Sentinel….but i was curious…a lot of authors who write in the SGA fandom write for TS also….so i went to Wikipedia to get the basic gist….and i found a few website archives….and im pretty much in love with this Fandom now……Jim/Blair only though….im picky about my ships.
i read the SGA Sentinel fic before i did any of that though…..and IN LOVE!!!
also: The Awakening…is like your best work todate. yay you!
Booffra
May 25, 2009 at 3:42 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I’ve just re-read this story for the 4th or 5th time, and just thought I should let you know how much I love it! I can’t remember how I found your fic, but it’s all fantastically written and so easy to immerse myself into. I can’t wait for any new stuff you produce. Love you. Booffra
entish-fan
June 6, 2009 at 9:13 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I downloaded The Awakening from your Yahoo site when you posted it and just stumbled across the fact that you posted PICTURES OF THE CHARACTERS! They are great, it helps me visualize the story even better when I’m reading it.
This story was so great that you got me hooked reading other TS fanfics and now I’m taping the episodes as they play on the Sci-Fi channel, which only seems to be one day a month
, just so I can see for myself what some of the stories are refering to. *sigh*
I’ve never watched Criminal Minds, but if you start writing in that universe I’ll probably get sucked into that too!
Thanks I love your writing style, you always make my day when I read and re-read your work.
You are truly amazing.
valendith
July 16, 2009 at 4:00 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
First of, I really like how you portray the workings and the social structures of the Sentinel/Guide society and the integration in “normal” society complete with the reactions of the “mundanes”. And I also find it very well written how you keep the partnership between Sentinel and Guide equal, I’ve read enough stories, where it wasn’t so…
PS: I just noticed that there is an error in part eight of “The Awakening”: first the PR-person of the PD is called Ms. Holmes and later on she is called Ms. Dennison, maybe you should fix that. I even checked the pdf-File on Y!groups, and the error was transfered to that to…
Sorry if I’m nitpicking, but that part threw me and ich re-read it a couple of times to see if I missed something…
Keira Marcos
July 16, 2009 at 6:46 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I don’t correct errors in my fic once it is posted but thanks for reading.
marli
July 21, 2009 at 5:35 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Oh Keira, i’ve only see than you’ve make faces on names like as I had asked !
Great choices of actors, thanks a lot.
Minako
July 23, 2009 at 4:09 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Please, please, please another sequel. Heath should be tortured more by Jacks universe! I loved that line among many others. Though I know that you have alot on your plate but anything on the backburner?
Keira Marcos
July 23, 2009 at 8:00 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Not for this. I actually wrote it a very long time ago. I would like to revisit this AU but it won’t be for a long while.
chrisking2005
August 9, 2009 at 5:44 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
*sighs happily*
I just read this (again) tonight, after seeing a rec on one of the LJ coms.
It’s just as good on the umpty-umpth reading as it is in the first.
Damn, you’re good.
*waves my Official Geriatric Fangirl pom poms for you*
lahgategirl
September 14, 2009 at 2:17 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I just finished reading the entire story and I have to say that I loved it! I really liked the way that you wrote Blair and Jim and how their relationship progressed. Thanks for sharing and writing.
slashaddict
October 20, 2009 at 11:37 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
So good… I liked the way you portrayed the prides and the relationship between the Sentinels-Guides… another great story!!
EmruasCat
October 29, 2009 at 12:44 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I actually read this a while back, close to when you first posted it. I’m now addicted to Sentinel fanfiction, and you are one of three fanfic authors who can take credit for this. I bow to you in thanks – and my body cries from lost sleep, as I find staying up and re-reading your tremendously awesome work more entertaining.
bluecimmers
November 27, 2009 at 4:05 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Shoot. I’m not sure how I found this story, but I’m sure glad I did. I’ll be rec’ing this on delicious.
Regarding grammar/spelling errors; I often don’t see ‘em, but my friend can’t avoid them. (It’s a superpower and a fatal weakness, both at the same time.) I was recently in the ER, and he glared at the sign behind my head and growled “I can’t believe they misspelled ‘hospital!’”
Keira Marcos
November 27, 2009 at 5:07 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
LMAO. I worked for Wal-Mart in my sordid youth. The month of December the store put all of these signs wishing the customers a happy holiday season– except the they mispelled “happy”.
Louise Cornwall
December 1, 2009 at 12:13 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
While I am definitely enjoying your Atlantis stories, I LOVED this one. I have read it at least 3 times in the 2 weeks since I found it. You are a better writer of The Sentinel world than the show’s writers were! Please, please, please write more!! (Beg, grovel – I’ll even send chocolate if you tell me where!)
Just, Awesome!
Oh, and I live in Alaska, too, alaska2 — the part closest to British Columbia, Southeast Alaska (Juneau, the capital, to be precise). So, does Alaska have their own pride? Are they not connected to the rest of the Pacific Northwest? Just cause the maps leave us off doesn’t mean we shouldn’t have Sentinels – especially since we are a great place to live in quiet solitude and come online!
Keira Marcos
December 1, 2009 at 9:51 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Oh. I definitely think that Alaska would have it’s own pride and probably it’s own Alpha Sentinel Prime just because geography would make any other circumstance problematic. They’d need their own confined heirachy to help keep the peace among prides. I imagine there would be urban and rural prides– stretched out over the entire state. That’s really exciting to think about actually all of that beautiful wilderness and a Sentinel with his Guide. I think you’ve given me a plot bunny.
Louise Cornwall
December 2, 2009 at 9:39 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Happy to oblige!
Jenny C
February 23, 2010 at 12:41 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Oooh – nice plot bunny! Do you think a Due South crossover would work? I can see Frasier as a sentinel, and ray as an unconventional guide.
Margie
January 2, 2010 at 11:23 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Wow! This is a wonderful story. You have a fresh take on Jim and Blair and captured their essence in your new world. I hope you write more in the TS fandom. When Elizabeth and her Sentinel actually got together I was actually tearing up. Lovely.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
alanna
February 12, 2010 at 8:20 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
ok let me just throw this out there… CRIMINAL MINDS/ SENTINEL CROSSOVER!!! yeah? think you wanna write it? no? oh well i had to ask.
i love all your work. (ALL OF IT)but is there any chance you will ever continue the” awakening”?
alanna
Keira Marcos
February 12, 2010 at 3:49 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Actually it’s crossed my mind to bring Hotch/Reid over from Criminal Minds if I do a sequel.
samantha
November 11, 2010 at 9:15 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
All i have to say is……………..SEQUAL?????????!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE??????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
grace lucas
March 3, 2010 at 12:48 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I have a qestion about awakenings in the story blair said his father was a sentinel but later jack kelso the senior guide prime of north amarica said he had known blair since he was born. Is he the father or his sentinel rick hunter?
Keira Marcos
March 3, 2010 at 4:58 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Blair’s father is dead.
allwhowander121
June 15, 2010 at 5:20 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I really need to watch this show, because I don’t wnat to read this before I see it bc I’m OCD this way.
Though i think I will be disappointed in it after your brilliant SGA sentinel series…
But I really want to read this so I need to watch it.
Keira Marcos
June 15, 2010 at 5:47 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I think you could read my story without watching the show. I tried to make it readable— as if it were original fiction.
krysalys
June 19, 2010 at 7:16 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I have something I’m making for you regarding this story, but I need to know who you’ve been imagining Rick Hunter to be. He’s the N.A. Prime Guide, yes? I have the perfect image of who Jack Kelso is… just unsure about his Guide.
Oh, wait. Timothy Hutton…… ???
*scampers off*
—–}-@
Keira Marcos
June 19, 2010 at 7:22 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Jack Kelso is the Guide. Rick Hunter is the Sentinel. I borrowed that name from an old cop show in the 80′s btw.
elemgi
July 10, 2010 at 6:59 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I am in a nostalgic mood and I had read this last year- I had forgotten how gripping, intense and well written this epic is. I have been an assiduous reader of most of your fic, and I mostly lurk, so I haven’t given you the praise you deserve. I’ve read many TS stories, and your AU here is in the top echelon in my view. Thank you, as well, for offering this as a PDF.
welfycat
July 24, 2010 at 10:42 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Your stuff is wonderful, as always (I never bothered to read this before because I’ve never seen The Sentinel, but then I saw you had an ebook of it and went for it) and I thought it was very lovely. I’m glad that Jim found his guide and Blair found his sentinel, they are very lovely together (and now if I ever watch this show I’m not going to be able to see them as anything other than a pair, the same way I can’t not see Rodney and John together from reading sga fic long before I saw the show). Your murder mystery was very awesome, and I love the pride’s in both of your Sentinel fics (both this one and the Atlantis cross over). Excellent job, great read, you’re fantastic!
Chris King
July 25, 2010 at 12:03 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
*doing the geriatric fangirl chairdance of glee*
I’m so excited!
*throws my pom poms in the air*
Everyone must pause to admire my helacious new geek skills. I’m a Luddite, hear me roar!
I downloaded the Epub thingy to my computer, and then transferred it to my shiny new Sony Reader and have been off snuggled up in bed, reading the Awakening and feeling very proud of myself.
*takes a bow*
And who said you can’t teach an old bitch new tricks.
*smirks*
Thanks for the remedial tech tutoring, Keira! I’m like a dog with two tails.
Yaoi no Kokoro
August 29, 2010 at 3:57 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I loved the story. Was my first “real” Sentinel story (only read Sentinels of Atlantis before) and it got me to watching the serie (already in the middle of the 2nd season).
Was a good read at my vacation although I have to admit I only read this one, because I got seasick on the sailboat and couldn´t read without the world swimming around me
But I soooo had to read the end, so I went on reading when we were anchoring and I wasn´t in the water.
Alwaysand
September 25, 2010 at 9:09 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Your sense of whimsy makes me laugh. I was rereading Awakening again and happened to look for the first time at the cast pictures. Michael T. Weiss as Edwards was cool but Andrea Parker as Marie Edwards was hilarious. I had to look 3 times before it hit me that with Black hair she was Miss Parker from Weiss’ show “The Pretender”
Keira Marcos
September 25, 2010 at 9:38 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
Alainia
February 4, 2011 at 6:02 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I keep re-re-re-reading all your SGA and Sentinel works because it’s been so long since you updated. *not a HP fan, at ALL* And I love them just as much every time as I did the first time around. I know you said recently that you had a bad fandom experience with this story, but I _LOVE_ it and really do wish you would write a sequel. *grins* Or any of those other works in progress you have, really. I mean, you are known as being something of a bitch, so don’t let the other *coughcough*indenial/lessintelligent*cough* bitches make you leave a fandom you obviously like.
OriginalTempus
March 22, 2011 at 2:24 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
You should try Keira’s HP story. I always tended to avoid HP fics as well, but trusting this author had me try it. I wasn’t disappointed. I thoroughly enjoy a stronger, pro-active Harry that Keira writes.
Jvixen
February 20, 2011 at 2:21 pm (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I had great time with this read and have to say thank you for writing it. And thank you for making it available in ePub. The portability was wonderful.
Julie
March 4, 2011 at 2:07 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
I’ve read this twice in the last… 48 hours I think. This is incredibly well done (could use a bit of a beta for typos or such but I’m not being picky – no way, no how!). I love it from beginning to end. The smart, tough Blair… the open and responsive Jim… everything about this is just wonderful.
Very well done!
Keira Marcos
March 5, 2011 at 4:33 am (UTC -5) Link to this comment
It actually had 2 betas but nothing is perfect. Shrugs.